A sequel to the Story
Writing a story
is not free from worldly hazards. It is like any other human activity which can
earn you fame or notoriety and at times both in the same vein. I was contemplative of the
subject because of my recent venture in honing my skills of story-writing which
was my passion for years. My imitative took almost a week to give shape to a
story, if it can be called one. After reading the story my wife didn't say a
word and took to her bed rather early. I knew she did not like the tragic
ending. But then nobody loves tragedy.
I often ask
myself –what are the other options available to a writer in such a situation.
Honestly I don’t find any. In some of the plays of earlier years a mechanism in
shape of deus ex machina was employed which was a sort of divine intervention
to give poetic justice to a situation which was grievously wrong. Unfortunately
life is not a well-made play with a beginning, the middle and the end. When the
very existence is an enigma, if one expected the sequences to re-enact
–frustration would be the answer. I curse myself for remaining aloof from the
filmy trend where hero always wins and all tragedies culminate in mid-summer
night’s dream with hero heroine dancing together in a scintillating duet.
Back from
imagination I found myself immobile with the surgical treatment of cataract.
The super specialist in ophthalmology –who happened to be my brother-in-law,
advised me rest for a week with no laptop around. After the third day I rang up
and said, ‘how can you be that cruel in the post-surgical treatment? Hitler
must be a pleasing personality compared to your advice.’ He grumbled initially
but agreed for a check-up the next day. After examining he was pleased with the
developments but said sternly, ’five minutes for mail and ten minutes for Facebook-
that is all you get for the next seven days and mind you, for any violation the
leniency stands terminated’. ‘But dear’ I pleaded ‘I don’t need laptop for
those things. I need it for writing and your fifteen minutes quota is as good
as nothing’. He threw a phial of eye drop and said ‘lubricate your eyes when
you are uncomfortable with your vision but use laptop half an hour at a stretch
and don’t use more than three hours in a day. I would ring up Bhauja to monitor
your viewing and install CCTV camera if need be. I wish I could see the
footage.’ These Docs are as suspicious as women I murmured’. ‘Did you say
something?’ he enquired. ‘Yes I said-thank you Doctor’. He threw me a
suspicious glance.
My friend rang
up yesterday and said ‘I read your nice little story and enjoyed the writing I
know of. Keep it up and we expect more’.
These sorts of
contradictory reactions made me sad and happy alternatively and consequently
leave me in an indecisive mode. Should I pursue my passion or concentrate on
poetry instead? The friend rang up once again and said, ‘I re-read your story
and believe me it is poetry all through’. I wish my wife heard it too.
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